Aislinn Pre-quel - Battle Creep

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Thanks you guys! I struggled

Thanks you guys!

I struggled with this piece for a long time. With an observation from Song, I was able to edit it and make it better. I always figured the first person she healed would have been Choshu or among the first.

I was sorting linking this present/past in with the future of events in Under a Blood Red Sky, might have even made Very the same elf Mother Sam was involved with, but I couldn't remember his name for the life of me! LOL

But hey, if GrimJack wants to play with this a little in the fact that he knew/knows Very in some way or something like that, it'll be cool, too. :)

Little Wren's picture
Posted by Little Wren on Tue, 08/25/2009 - 09:38
Wren, very nice read!

Wren, very nice read! Was great to have a glimpse into Aislinn's past, the day to day impact of the war, and a specific example of how the calling of Mathern's children supersedes political/racial/etc barriers.

I especially liked the vulnerability shown by the fall into the river and the laughing at herself... as well as the show down where duty helped hold her resolve in the face of fear & danger.

It would be fun to work in Quil knowing Very. Either as members of the same clan or knowing of him from another clan. A darker connection could be that Very is one of the dead in the room, which Aislinn would react to assuming the group gets through the terseness of the moment and have a chance to attend to the fallen.

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Posted by GRIMJACK on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 09:41
Great minds!

I did have that thought about Very being one of the dead, actually. LOL

I just love tormenting my PCs too much, I guess. :) I swear this priestess is emotional enough for the whole group, or at least it seems she has been so far! =D

Thank you, Grim for the kind words. And we'll get through this bit of tenseness I'm sure. It just might take a bit more conversation. :)

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Posted by Little Wren on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 09:53
Heh.... Let's have it known,

Heh....

Let's have it known, however, that your usually, overly sadistic GM had NOTHING to do with this potential storylink. :D

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Posted by Paragon on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 14:02
ROFL!

No, for once Paragon didn't make Aislinn cry. :p

Little Wren's picture
Posted by Little Wren on Wed, 08/26/2009 - 14:31
Wow!!! What a surpise to log

Wow!!!

What a surpise to log in and see a side piece and a new image.

What a joy to read the side piece and be so drawn into it that it the substance overshadowed the excitement of there being something new.

Delightful!!!

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Posted by Paragon on Mon, 08/24/2009 - 18:29
The balance

This is looking mighty fine, LW. I do keenly appreciate the balance between the idyllic beginning and the horror that takes over later on -- and the common humanity to be found even in members of different races.

Well done. :)

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Posted by Songstress on Mon, 08/24/2009 - 15:52